whitewing

It's so cute and fluffy. c: The only thing I have the issue with is the fluff of the.. give me like 10 minutes, left leg? The leg in front. Maybe it's just me but it seems as though theres a bulging muscle or maybe she/he is just having a bad hair day. I'm not familiar with the books or your OC's, so suppose it's just a trait. But other than that, everything seems flawless.

Their expression gives me the idea that she/he is curious or ready for adventure, if it wasn't the expression you were going for, I suppose a tweak in the eyes/eyebrows would be in order. But suppose it's simply up to the viewer?

The tail is so cute and simple, just makes me want to brush it, same with the hind quarters. There's a little confusion as to how the foot is placed under her/his haunch, but that's me being too anal. xP

ANYWAYS. Beautiful work, I especially like the shades of grey and white, you could have simply been like "NOPE YOU GUYS DONT DESERVE SHADES" but it's beautifully colored. <3

4/5 on Originality because its from a book? Other than that it would be a 5, I just don't want to be all.. Oh my god you created this allll by yourself, just a way to give some credit to the author.